What does a comma do.
I have refused them so often and left them out so much and
did without them so continually that I have come finally to
be indifferent to them. I do not now care whether you put
them in or not but for a long time I felt very definitely
about them and would have nothing to do with them.
As I say commas are servile and they have no life of their own,
and their use is not a use, it is a way of replacing one’s own
interest and I do decidedly like to like my own interest my
own interest in what I am doing. A comma by helping you along
holding your coat for you and putting on your shoes keeps you
from living your life as actively as you should lead it and to
me for many years and I still do feel that way about it only
now I do not pay as much attention to them, the use of them
was positively degrading. Let me tell you what I feel and what
I mean and what I felt and what I meant.
When I was writing those long sentences of The Making of Americans,
verbs active present verbs with long dependent adverbial clauses
became a passion with me. I have told you that I recognize verbs
and adverbs aided by prepositions and conjunctions with pronouns
as possessing the whole of the active life of writing.
Complications make eventually for simplicity and therefore
I have always liked dependent adverbial clauses. I have like
dependent adverbial clauses because of their variety of dependence
and independence. You can see how loving the intensity of
complication of these things that commas would be degrading.
Why if you want the pleasure of concentrating on the final
simplicity of excessive complication would you want any
artificial aid to bring about that simplicity. Do you see
now why I feel about that simplicity. Do you see now why I feel about
the comma as I did and as I do.
Think about anything you really like to do and you will see what I mean.
When it gets really difficult you want to disentangle rather
than to cut the knot, at least of anybody feels who is working
with any thread, so anybody feels who is working with any tool
so anybody feels who is writing any sentence or reading it after
it has been written. And what does a comma do, a comma does nothing
but make easy a thing that if you like it enough is easy enough without
the comma. A long complicated sentence should force itself upon you,
make you know yourself knowing it and the comma, well at the most a
comma is a poor period that lets you stop and take a breath but if
you want to take a breath you ought to know yourself that you want
to take a breath. It is not like stopping altogether has something
to do with going on, but taking a breath well you are always taking
a breath and why emphasize one breath rather than another breath.
Anyway that is the way I felt about it and I felt that about it very
very strongly. And so I almost never used a comma. The longer, the
more complicated the sentence the greater the number of the same
kinds of words I had following one after another, the more the
very more I had of them the more I felt the passionate need of
their taking care of themselves by themselves and not helping them,
and thereby enfeebling them by putting in a comma.